Formal letter
Dear Sir Bevis
My name is Samuel Jackon Jr. I´m 20 years old and i´m from London. I´m writing this letter because i´ll like to apply for a job and i want to know if you can help me.
I had worked for Sir Longbotton as his squire, i served him in many battles and justices, I´m strong, fast, and very efficient. I know very well the arts and duties of being a squire. I'm also very loyal and I can assure I will serve you very well.
I really appreciate if you can consider my job request. In my family we are 6 and my mother is in bed because of an illness so i need the money to help my family.
Thank you very much
Samuel Jackson Jr
My name is Samuel Jackon Jr. I´m 20 years old and i´m from London. I´m writing this letter because i´ll like to apply for a job and i want to know if you can help me.
I had worked for Sir Longbotton as his squire, i served him in many battles and justices, I´m strong, fast, and very efficient. I know very well the arts and duties of being a squire. I'm also very loyal and I can assure I will serve you very well.
I really appreciate if you can consider my job request. In my family we are 6 and my mother is in bed because of an illness so i need the money to help my family.
Thank you very much
your sincerely
Samuel Jackson Jr
The letter is too short and you use informal expressions. Next time work with rubrics to improve before publishing
ResponderEliminarThe letter is short because i was absent when you give the homework, so i try to do it with what i saw from my classmates
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